Draft2 Thanks letter to mrs ginger

Dear Mrs. Ginger,

     Thank you for teaching me art. My favorite part was when we did the birds. Another part I liked was when we did the hearts. Finally, I liked doing the Amarican flags. Do you remember when I painted My wings on the heart blue then I had to paint over it? Thank you again for art.

                                                     Sincerely,

                                                                    Julia

big writing draft1 thanks letter to mrs ginger

Dear Mrs. Ginger,

Thank you for teaching me art. My favorite part was when we made the birds. Another one I liked was doing the hearts. Finally, I liked doing the American flags. Remember when I Painted My wings on the heart blue and I had to paint over it? Thank you again for teaching me art.

Big writing draft 2 thanks letter mrs jeannie

Dear Mrs. Jeannie,

Thank you for being a chaperon of the Ping Pong Pigs. Thank you for looking at the crystals with me. Thank you for paying for all the food. It was good. Do you remember when we got to see the Hope Diamond and all the cool art? Thank you again for being a chaperon.

                                                   Sincerely,

                                                                   Julia

Big writing draft 1 thanks letter mrs jeannie

Dear Mrs. Jeannie,

Thank you for being a chaperon of the Ping Pong Pigs. Thank you for looking at the crystals with me. Thank you for paying for all the food. It was good. Do you remember when we got to see the Hope Diamond and all the cool art? Thank you again for being a chaperon.

Big writing draft #2 Thanks letter mrs corroline

     Dear Mrs. Caroline

     Thank you for being a chaperone of the Ping Pong Pigs. Thank you for paying and riding the ride at the Air and Space Museum. I thought it was really fun. Thank you for making the trip really fun. Sometimes you would make me laugh. Thanks again for being a part of the Ping Pong Pigs.

                          Sincerely,
                          Julia

Big writing draft 1 thanks letter mrs coroline

     Dear Mrs. Caroline

Thanks for being a chaperone of the ping pong pigs. Thanks for paying and riding the ride at the air and space musem. I thought it was really fun. Thanks for making the trip really fun. Sometimes you would make me laugh. Thanks again for being apart of the ping pong pigs.

Sincerely, 

                 Julia

Big Writing Draft #2 thanks letter mrs hether

Dear Ms. Heather,

      Thank you for being a chaperone for the Ping PongPigs. Thanks for paying for the ice cream in Washington DC. I thought it was good. I also liked sitting on the bus with you. You made me laugh a lot. Do you remember when we saw that Moshey Monster giant purple gem? That was so funny I will never forget that. Thanks again for being a chaperone of the Ping Pong Pigs on the Washington DC trip.

                                                                    Sincerely,

    Julia

Draft 2 big writting washington dc

     These are things I did in Washington DC. I saw the Wax Museum,Zoo,The creek.
  
  I like going to the Wax Museum.  One thing I liked about it is seeing all of the wax figures. Another thing I liked was taking pictures on the desk and where Obama speech was. The last reason I liked it was I always go tricked about if it was real or not. One time I got tricked on the camera flashes.

       I also liked the ZOO. I liked watching the tigers drink and play.Another thing I liked was almost getting to play tug-o-war with the chimpanzee's . Finally, I liked watching the monkey play with the piece of cloth. The first time I saw the chimpanzee I thought it was cute.

   Finally, I liked going to the creek.  I liked going to the creek because I got to finding all different animals. Another reason I liked it is I kept on sliping on all of the rocks so it made it harder. Finally, I liked it when my sister and I had a water fight. When we had a water fight and I sliped on a rock when we where doing it.
   
      These are the things that I liked in Washington DC. I hope i can go back and be there again.

Big writing draft 1 Washington DC

     Thank you Mrs. Heather for being a chaperone for the ping pong pigs. Thanks for paying for the ice cream in Washington DC. I thought it was good. I also liked sitting on the bus with you. You made me laugh a lot. Do you remember when we saw that Moshey Monster giant purple gem? That was so funny I will never forget that. Thanks again for being a chaperone of the Ping Pong Pigs on the Washington DC trip.

                                                                    Sincerely,

    Julia

draft#2 wolf preserve

I went to the wolf preserve to learn about wolfs:

      Wolves can hunt deer. I also learned the when you howl the wolves start talking to each other. Finally I learned that wolves are not mean to people so stop killing them. The first time touched the wolf I thought if would bite me.

      Another thing I liked was seeing spirit the hero wolf. I feel bad for since he lost his leg. When he was trying to separate the female fight his leg got in the way and it got pulled off. When I saw spirit come I said that cant be spirit because it was going to fast but it was him.

my big writing wolf preserve draft 1

I went to the wolf preserve to learn about wolfs:

 Wolves can hunt deer. I also learned the when you howl the wolves start talking to each other. Finally I learned that wolves are not mean to people so stop killing them. The first time touched the wolf i thought if would bite me.

Another thing i liked was seeing spirit the hero wolf. I feel bad for since he lost his leg. When he was trying to separate the female fight his leg got in the way and it got pulled off. When I saw spirit come i said that cant be spirit because it was going to fast but it was him.

  

Draft 1

     I like going to the Wax Museum.

     We went to the Wax Museum. One thing I liked about it is seeing all of the wax figures. Another thing i liked was taking pictures on the desk and where Obama speech was. The last reason I liked it was I always go tricked about if it was real or not. One time I got tricked on the camera flashes.

       I also liked the ZOO.
I liked watching the tigers drink and play.Another thing I liked was almost getting to play tug-o-war with the chimpanzee's . Finally, I liked watching the monkey play with the piece of cloth. The first time I saw the chimpanzee i thought it was cute.

   Finally, I liked going to the creek.

     I liked going to the creek because I got to finding all different animals. Another reason I liked it is I kept on sliping on all of the rocks so it made it harder. Finally, I liked it when my sister and I had a water fight. When we had a water fight and i sliped on a rock when we where doing it.