Weather Draft 2

     I think cold weather is bad because you can't go to the pool and I really like the pool. I also don't like it because we can't go to the beach because I like to look at all the animals and go let the fish nibble on my toes. When it is cold it might start to rain and then if I am in my neighborhood like in my friends house witch is in the back loop ( My neighborhood is shaped like an 8) I will have to sprint back to my house.

     I don't like to sprint beck to the house because I will be exhausted because I just ran to my friends house but after I did that my mom would call on the walky talkey and say.."Julia time to come home it is raining" And then I would go back home.But I also like it because it can snow and then you could catch it with your tongue.

Wether Draft 1

1.I think cold weather is bad because you can't go to the pool and i really like the pool. I also don't like it because we can't go to the beach cause i like to look at all the animals and go let the fish nibble on my toes. When it is cold it might start to rain and then if i am in my neighborhood like in my friends house witch is in the back loop ( My neighborhood is shaped like an 8) i will have to sprint back to my house.


2.I don't like to sprint beck to the house because i will be exhausted because i just ran to my friends house but after i did that my mom would call on the walky talkey and say.."Julia time to come home it is raining" And then i would go back home.But i also like it because it can snow and then you could catch it with your tongue.

What i am looking foward to at thanksgiving

     I am looking forward to thanksgiving because i get to finiley play with my friends!
I also can't wait until i can eat all that turkey and ham yum yum.
Finaley, I can't wait until i can go horse back riding.

2. I am also looking forward to maybe going to becahunas.

1.I am thankful for my parents.  When a stranger comes up to me my mom can protect me. They also give me  shelter . The other day I was walking threw the park and my mom was with me and  a stranger came up to me. He almost took me but my mom kicked him. That is why i am thankful for my parents

2. I am thankful for my puppy. She is 4 years old. When I take her for a walk she makes a squeaky noise  and that warns me to look at what she is barking at.  One day  I was walking her she did that noise and I saw a squirrel. That is why I am thankful for my dog

3. I am thankful for my sister because she can help me with my homework.  She can also be nice to me.  The other day I had a ton of homework and she helped me with it. That is why I am thankful for my sister.

 That is why I am thankful for these things!!!!!!!

Draft 2 Script Halloween

Holiday: Happy Halloween!! (scene # 1), Zoe, Amber, Chloe, Lizzy, Ashley Zoe: Ok we’ve been trick or treating for hours! And its getting kind of dark, I need to go home and feed my dogs.... Amber: Wow! You are such a chicken! Ashley: Well Amber, I don't know the chickens got a point... Lizzy: Well yeah I agree with Zoe it is sort of spooky. Chloe: What ever I think that we should go around the neighborhood about three more times and stash up on candy! Amber: Alright I agree with Chloe we should go around and stash up on candy. If Ashley,Lizzy and Zoe want to go back, that’s fine but I think that there is nothing even close to spooky! Zoe, Ashley Lizzy: Whatever we just want to go back!! Chloe: Why to go do our English assignment ? (sarcastic) Lizzy: Ok yeah that’s why we want to go back we have that English test!? Amber: Um-mm...Lizzy Chloe was just kidding we don’t have an English assignment it is Saturday! Ashley: Oh ok, we will go around once but that is it!! ( Chloe and Amber sigh) To be continued...

Dear Dr. Frank Grutzner

     My name is Julia i'm 8 years old. I am a student at T.E.S.L.A which stands for Technology Engineering Science Leadership Academy located in Santa Rosa Beach FL.

     We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the most ultimate living thing?" I chose the fish. Ornithorhynchus anatinus.

As Part of the way we do projects at T.E.S.L.A we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was wondering if you could take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved and things that I have done well. Here is the link for my project.

Thank you
Julia Brown
T.E.S.L.A

Draft #2 9/21/11

     Nature has many extreme living things. I think the most extreme is the Fish. This is because of many reasons. One reason it is extreme is that it has tremendous speed. Also, it has a really cool skin because they can feel vibrations.. Finally I think it is extreme because they sometimes lives far away from us.The Fish is an extreme living thing because they are so hard to catch and I like that!!!!! Just yesterday I caught a fish!!!!Another reason the Fish  is an extreme living thing is because if you try to catch them since they are fast you cant catch them.Finally, the fish is an extreme living thing because they  are a really colorful animal .they can swim so fast because of there strong tail. The other day i saw a fish on the beach.That is why I think fish is an extreme animal.

Draft #1 9/21/11

     Nature has many extreme living things. I think the most extreme is the Fish. This is because of many reasons. One reason it is extreme is that it has tremendous speed. Also, it has a really cool skin because they can feel vibrations.. Finally I think it is extreme because they sometimes lives far away from us.The Fish is an extreme living thing because they are so hard to catch and I like that!!!!! Just yesterday I caught a fish!!!!Another reason the Fish  is an extreme living thing is because if you try to catch them since they are fast you cant catch them.Finally, the fish is an extreme living thing because they  are a really colorful animal .they can swim so fast because of there strong tail. The other day i saw a fish on the beach.That is why I think fish is an extreme animal.

Draft #2 9/21/11

Nature has many extreme living things. I think the most extreme is the Fish. This is because of many reasons. One reason it is extreme is that it has tremendous speed. Also, it has a really cool skin because they can feel vibrations.. Finally I think it is extreme because they sometimes lives far away from us.The Fish is an extreme living thing because they are so hard to catch and I like that!!!!! Just yesterday I caught a fish!!!!Another reason the Fish  is an extreme living thing is because if you try to catch them since they are fast you cant catch them.Finally, the fish is an extreme living thing because they  are a really colorful animal .they can swim so fast because of there strong tail. The other day i saw a fish on the beach.That is why I think fish is an extreme animal.

Draft 2 Cars 9/14/11

     Cars can go really fast.They can go so fast that sometimes you can turn so sharp you could fly of the road!!!!!!!!!!!!   They can get you to your grandmas house so speedy. But, if your grandmas house is so far away like 300 miles, you could get there in 3 hours. Cars can also last way longer than skateboards.                                       

Draft 1 Cars

     Cars can go really fast.They can go so fast that sometimes you can turn so sharp you could fly of the road!!!!!!!!!!!!   They can get you to your grandmas house so fast. But, if your grandmas house is so far away like 300 miles you could get there in 3 hours. Cars can also last way longer than skateboards.                                         
 

story draft 2

  One horrible day at camp green lake.

         
          One hot morning at Camp Green Lake a girl named Julia woke up and went to the faucet to

Fill her canteen up with water. "Hi said"Sarah Kate"  
     Hello" said Julia. Sarah Kate & Julia were best friends they met each other on the first day of
camp. The next time that they dug holes Sarah Kate dug Julia's hole because Sarah Kate loved to dig holes. 
     Then the next day Sarah Kate got caught digging Julia's hole so the counselor got taken to the hospital because some dirt flew in his eyeball. When he got to the hospital he saw a person with snake venom nail polish! She was also so cute but really mean so,the counselor went to her and said "will you be my girl friend?"The women did absoulutly nothing and that freaked out at the counselor and then the women slapped the counselor and then the counselor started hurting because it was snake venom.

My story

   One horrible day at camp green lake.

         
          One hot morning at Camp Green Lake a girl named Julia woke up and went to the foset to

fill her cantin up with water. "Hi said"Sarah Kate"
"hello" said Julia. Sarah Kate & Julia were best friends they met each other on the first day of
camp. The next time that they dug holes Sarah Kate dug Julia's hole because Sarah Kate loved to dig holes. Then the next day Sarah Kate got caught digging Julia's hole so the counselor got taken to the hospital because some dirt flew in his eyeball.

The Most Iteresting Thing - draft one

Alaska is the most interesting place in the world

it is interesting because you can explore and see really cool animals!

 It is also interesting because  sometimes it snows and you can play in it!

finally it is neat because you can go on a vacation!!!!