5 Paragraph essay

     If I could be anyone for a day I would be Mrs. Ginger. I would want to be her because she is             fashionable, creative and helpful. 

     I would also want to be her because she is fashionable. She is fashionable because every time I see her she's like wearing a skirt or something with jeans and like a candy shirt or something. I also like all of her clothes. One time I saw here at publix with really really cute pants and shirts. That is why she is fashionable.

     I would also like to be her because she is creative. She is really creative to think of all the things she thinks of for art. Another reason is she makes really creative abstract stuff. one time i went to her house and I saw a really cool rainbow E for Emma in her room.

     I would want to be her because she is helpful. She is helpful because when me and Emma couldn't reach something she got it for us. Another reason is because she teaches art and I like making crafts. The other day she helped me with Language arts. That is why she is helpful.

     That is why I think Mrs.Ginger is fashionable, creative and helpful.

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     Gymnastics is a really fun sport.Gymnastics is awesome because you can flip and go upside down all day!It is also fun because you can jump on a trampoline.One time I went to open gym and I bounced on the trampoline the whole time. Now, you see that gymnastics is a fantastic sport!

Main idea:Gymnastics is a really fun sport

Proof (1): Gymnastics is awesome because you can flip and go upside down all day!

Proof (2):It is also fun because you can jump on a trampoline.

Illustration (has a time word):One time I wet to open gym and I bounced on the trampoline the whole time.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way) :Now, you see that gymnastics is a fantastic sport!

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Bad Kitty Gets A Bath

By: Nick Bruel

     Today I learned about a cats tongue. I learned that there are hundreds of tiny fishhook shaped barbs called "papillae". The little barbs will help her to comb her fur as the licks herself. Her tongue will also catch loose hairs that she could swallow. That is what I read today.

Goat in the Garden

By Ben Baglio

     Today, I read about a girl named Mandy. She wanted to have a pet goat, while she was running she found one. It belonged to someone in Mississippi and she lives in Boulder, so she decided to keep the goat. Finally,she didn't know what to feed it so she just feed it dog food! That is what I read today.