Weather Draft 2

     I think cold weather is bad because you can't go to the pool and I really like the pool. I also don't like it because we can't go to the beach because I like to look at all the animals and go let the fish nibble on my toes. When it is cold it might start to rain and then if I am in my neighborhood like in my friends house witch is in the back loop ( My neighborhood is shaped like an 8) I will have to sprint back to my house.

     I don't like to sprint beck to the house because I will be exhausted because I just ran to my friends house but after I did that my mom would call on the walky talkey and say.."Julia time to come home it is raining" And then I would go back home.But I also like it because it can snow and then you could catch it with your tongue.

Wether Draft 1

1.I think cold weather is bad because you can't go to the pool and i really like the pool. I also don't like it because we can't go to the beach cause i like to look at all the animals and go let the fish nibble on my toes. When it is cold it might start to rain and then if i am in my neighborhood like in my friends house witch is in the back loop ( My neighborhood is shaped like an 8) i will have to sprint back to my house.


2.I don't like to sprint beck to the house because i will be exhausted because i just ran to my friends house but after i did that my mom would call on the walky talkey and say.."Julia time to come home it is raining" And then i would go back home.But i also like it because it can snow and then you could catch it with your tongue.

What i am looking foward to at thanksgiving

     I am looking forward to thanksgiving because i get to finiley play with my friends!
I also can't wait until i can eat all that turkey and ham yum yum.
Finaley, I can't wait until i can go horse back riding.

2. I am also looking forward to maybe going to becahunas.

1.I am thankful for my parents.  When a stranger comes up to me my mom can protect me. They also give me  shelter . The other day I was walking threw the park and my mom was with me and  a stranger came up to me. He almost took me but my mom kicked him. That is why i am thankful for my parents

2. I am thankful for my puppy. She is 4 years old. When I take her for a walk she makes a squeaky noise  and that warns me to look at what she is barking at.  One day  I was walking her she did that noise and I saw a squirrel. That is why I am thankful for my dog

3. I am thankful for my sister because she can help me with my homework.  She can also be nice to me.  The other day I had a ton of homework and she helped me with it. That is why I am thankful for my sister.

 That is why I am thankful for these things!!!!!!!